Natalie was born in Enoch Bunch’s trailer bed, a-way pas’ midnight, under a rare third moon in chill October. Or maybe she was left there.
He was early-widowed, growing older, she a promise finally kept. No sign of a mother, so he raised her hisself, taught her all he knew of the woods and river. The rest she figgered out for herself.
Under Natalie’s wisewoman care, he lived longer’n anyone woulda guessed. She buried him next to his wife, then took the truck, built a home deep, and deeper in the woods.
Some swear that house sprouted chicken legs.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2022)
Carrot Ranch Prompt (11/14/2022): In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes a lie. What is the lie? It can be subtle or blatant. Who tells the lie and why? Is it an unreliable narrator? Go where the prompt leads!
I love the lilting tall tale type telling of this.
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Thank you!
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With a little help from my friends……
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The core of a novel in 99 words. Go for it, Liz.
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