The challenge? Write a story in 6 sentences, no more & no less, and if you’d like, share your creation or just visit and comment on others’ ideas, with GirlieOnTheEdge, Denise. The prompt is “METER”, and here’s where you join the party: Six Sentence Stories
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“Maybe you oughtta check the meter, instead o’ just eyeballin’ tha thing?”
The answer to that was a raised eyebrow and a sharp chin notched upward…a bit of the hairy eyeball.
“I mean, the Grandmaster Grimoire says you have ta get the right combo, tha right timing, in tha right amount, or there’s gonna be major troubles, for sure.”
The answer to THAT was an exasperated puff at the mangled name – it was more accurately called ‘The Great Great Greats Gramma’s Grimoire’, after all – followed by palms cupped and fingers slightly curled around a pale blue swirl of glittering crystals joining and flattening to flakes, and a low hum that began deep in the chest.
Kevin was right in pointing out that timing was critical, and if she hadn’t been casting this spell for so many eons, and he hadn’t been under her tutelage for so many decades, she might’ve hesitated; there was a lot at stake here, right-timing was paramount to purest instinct, and he needed to learn to trust her instinct if he were to ever learn to trust his own.
She began to divide the humming up into rhythmic grunts, and with an explosion of breath, scattered the wind runes that began the winter season in earnest.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2022)
“…right-timing was paramount to purest instinct..”
No truer words! Now, I shall be off to read Spelling Lesson Number 2…but wait…let me just find an extra blanket 😉
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Ha! You’re gonna ned that extra blanket!
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I agree. Casting a spell is like baking a cake, all the right ingredients have to come together at the right time or it’s overcooked, and doesn’t quite work.
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It’s tricky work, for sure. And Part 2 shows why…😉
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Got any winter left over for down here? We still had A/C running up until yesterday!
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I heard. Uffda! If we could send it to you in a tasty snow cone…or a blended margarita!…we would. 🐧💙
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Kevin needs to sit back and enjoy the ride! I certainly did: what a charming magical tale, Liz! ❄️❄️❄️
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Thank you! Glad you sat for a spell & enjoyed!🐧💙
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Timely indeed, at least for those of us in the Northern hemisphere. I’m not much for the fantasy genre, but I enjoyed this. 🙂
–Shay/Fireblossom in WP clothing
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Thanks for stopping by, and for y our kind comment!
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” …sharp chin notched upward.
Fave line.
What a great start to what (hopefully) will be a serial Six.
(Gonna take direct inspiration*) back to one of my Sixes-in-waiting.
Your use of this week’s prompt word is surely on of the most challenging of it’s various definitions.
Nicely done!
*almost to borrow wholesale lol
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Glad I can help!
Check my page for Part 2. An’…that’s all she’ll write on this!
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magnificent mataphor good job will this have a sequel
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It does! It’s Spelling Lesson Number 2, and it’s on my page now!
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I’m looking for a spell of my own -one that teaches me instantly to use wordpress on a tablet! I wrote a comment, pressed a button by mistake and Whoosh – it was gone!
Take 2: what a magical tale, Liz. I could see it all from your words. And the apprentice who’s not quite there yet, who just has to hang onto the rule book. Who will learn to trust the feeling…
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With WordPress, things come & go, functions appear and disappear like magic! It’s a waiting game…😆
Happy that the story worked so well for you. High praise from a very fine writer (you, of course!).
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Grandmaster Grimoire sounds like someone to avoid. Who knows when the spells might work. It sounds like the snows are coming.
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Well, yes, Frank. 😊 check out Spelling Lessin Number 2!
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‘ a pale blue swirl of glittering crystals joining and flattening to flakes’ to ensure we won’t all be runed, said Hanrahan. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Said_Hanrahan
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I’ve never read that poem before! Expect the worst & bless the best.
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Not their monkeys but sure enough, ended as our circus!
Liz, your winter story makes its coming a magical one…memories of wonders in a child’s eyes.
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