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To one direction, the railroad tracks led through a town choked and busy with deals being made, horses drawing carriages to protect the well-heeled inhabitants, and creaking wagons wide open and welcoming the cloudless sky, their boots crammed with sleepy children after a successful day at market, wedged in between baskets and the few wares that hadn’t sold; beyond the town’s borders, dusty roads and half-grown fields shimmered in the late-day heat.
They were all returning home, but she was not.
She turned her gaze back to the river, listening for the sound of a steam-driven paddleboat that was surely just around the bend, even if running late.
Pulling her carpet bag a bit closer to her skirt and sturdy boots, she sat up straighter on the bench by the quay, adjusting the ribbons of her church-going hat.
Except that she wasn’t going to church, was in fact leaving the parish to somewhere in the future when her options would not be as limited; she had dreams that did not include transfer from her father’s home to the household of the recently-widowed banker with half a dozen “challenging” children.
The paddleboat might be running late, but she was just in time; her father and the banker had gone on a week-long business trip together in the big city, and the rest of the town—though they would miss her—sympathized; none of them would have anything to report about her departure.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2026)
Oh, Liz, there are some real gems of phrases in this Six, partikcularly “ribbons of her church-going hat” — it instantly created a picture of her that carried right through to end. I love this so much. Full of hope and renewed life.
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Happy it pleased and glad it held the mood! Thanks, Misky!
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Oh yes, I like this a lot!
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I’m glad! Thank you!
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Oh, you’re going? What an interesting way to find a new place… good luck, my dear!
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Good for her
(and no cell phones for the townsfolk to call and rat her out)
serial Six in the making?
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Probs not with this one. Tho’ the escape scenario comes up a lot for me. 😉
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Free at last, a delightful story.
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Thank you, Someone!
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Thank god she can escape, I also wouldn’t wanna marry in her shoes. Hopefully she will have a nice voyage and a good future.
Great story :)
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Thanks, Reelika!
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Creedance!
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I like how the town folk covered her escape.
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They knew what was truly going on.
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