I’d taken to the deepest forest,
Slipping under darknight canopy,
Desperate for a glittering mask,
A gilt-net bag of Turkish Delight,
Strands held tight in concealing ice.
***
Climbing into the sleigh,
I’m swept away,
My heart shrinks sere in rushing wind,
Until nothing is left
In my hollowed chest.
***
Gazing sidewise, longing-wise,
Eying pomegranates and ice wine,
To become forever stilled.
***
Then you come for me,
Warm, fierce, laughing and apologetic,
On that damned polar bear:
Furs and fishy breath,
Less than perfect.
***
My heart melts,
Grows toward your light,
Still there, after all.
Because Turkish Delight never satisfies.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2024)
Two challenges, two prompts:
This? Write a story in exactly 6 sentences based on Denise’s one word prompt: HEART. Visit, comment, and write & post your own on Six Sentence Stories
And the other?
Carrot Ranch Prompt (02/13/2024): In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about an intolerable mask. Who is wearing the mask and why? What is so intolerable about the mask? Is there empathy for the one behind the mask? Go where the prompt leads!

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A bit of classic fiction, some great archaic language; what’s not to like?
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Cuz sometimes, you just gotta!
(cackle!)
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“My heart shrinks sere in rushing wind,
Until nothing is left
In my hollowed chest.”
A most potent line, (and my favorite) plus, I learned new word!
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Thank you, Denise!
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Well done, as usual! I am in awe of the stories you manage to create with so few words…..
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Thank you so much, Ann! Glad they please.
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They don’t have to be perfect to be perfect for you.
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Yep, because I’m sure not…time to enjoy life!
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What a lovely poem, especially with Turkish Delight – I had some only last week!
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Thanks, Chris. Maybe try some Snickers? Cuz Snickers satisfies you (as adverts would have us believe). 😉
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Aaah, “His Dark Materials” and are you Lyra Belacqua by any chance? Lovely poem.
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Perhaps my fictional self is Lyra (checks the bear for armor). 😄
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🥰
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A fanciful poem! I love NARNIA and your reference to Turkish Delight!
💙👍💙
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So happy to have pleased!
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Who wouldn’t melt for a less than perfect fishy fella on a polar bear? This rings with magic.
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Or is it the bear
That perfumes the air
With fish?
Thanks, Deanna!🌟
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Although I’ve never had Turkish Delight I can’t imagine it satisfying for very long. Laughter coming on a polar bear sounds like the perfect less-than-perfect alternative.
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Thanks, Frank. Yes, imperfection and a polar bear has more interest and longevity, for sure. 😉
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Love your incorporation of Turkish Delight, a Narnian nod to transformation. The warmth we feel when the mask slips way to behold something real, authentic.
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Thank you!
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