The Huntress’ narrow prow cuts through darkness,
The only sound a plashing single paddle.
Destination known, she’s grateful to see nothing
Below the river’s surface.
Prepared, yes, but she wants to go slowly,
Like seepage down a cell wall.
***
The boat jerks, grabbed from beneath
By those who would steer her elsewhere.
She keeps her course.
Hours pass.
***
At last the shore,
A pale line of sun that never rises here.
The Huntress scrapes on black pebbles.
A skeletal hand holds out a red, tufted fruit,
Torn open, revealing its dripping scarlet interior.
***
Her mouth reaches, accepts its finality.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2023)
Carrot Ranch Prompt (11/21/2023): In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a ship named the Huntress. What type of ship is it? Where does it go and what does it carry? Who are the characters involved with this ship? What happens? Go where the prompt leads!
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An interesting story!
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Thank you for stopping by! Glad it sparked interest.
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I’m glad I’m not on that boat, or at that desination. I liked how each of the separate sections built a sense of tension.
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Jeez!! I didn’t realize how tightly I was gripping my Mac!
What a great read!
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Thank you…glad it gripped you and the Mac!
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My goodness; you went to an enchanting place with that prompt!
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Kinda scary, huh?
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A gripping story
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome Liz
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Cool and classic!
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Thank you!
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