Happily Ever After

They could’ve gone to the right

To the tidy brown cottage in the ring of aspens.

Goat nibbling happily on the turf roof.

It had reminded them of home.

 But they went left.

To the gingerbread house with the candy kitchen.

Blood-red door, vanilla frosting dripping from the eaves.

Fencing made of gingerbread children.

They’d been lost in the woods for ever so long.

The crow could tell you how it all came out.

But it’s not what you’d expect.

The children were canny, the witches kind.

They were all from the same family,

So deep within the woods.

© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2021)

Carrot Ranch Prompt (10/28/2021):  In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that features a candy kitchen. You can interpret the phrase creatively or stick to the traditional. Is it sweet? Ironic? Any genre will do. Go where the prompt leads!

18 thoughts on “Happily Ever After

  1. Pingback: Candy Kitchen « Carrot Ranch Literary Community

  2. I absolutely love this “sweet” ending. It’s perfectly executed (although the children were not). It’s happy without being too cheery, just…lovely. Beautiful wording throughout, too. Love this: Blood-red door, vanilla frosting dripping from the eaves. 🍭

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