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It wasn’t often that he sat still long enough to observe anyone of their kind, but she held a certain fascination; usually the best course of action was to keep to the shadows and skedaddle if they crept too close.
Young children posed no threat, and dogs were suspicious of any irregularity, but a pinecone, launched swift and deft, was usually enough to discombobulate those creatures.
She was regular in habit, having arrived alone at the isolated cabin by the lake about a month ago: morning coffee in the shelter of the screened porch before wandering across butterfly fields with a small backpack, a journal in which she sketched and wrote, or if rainy, trudging in noisy wellies and green raingear; a simple sandwich and tea for lunch on the porch or on the dock that stretched and wavered like a questing finger into the cold, clear lake water; a mason jar of wine at sunset with a light dinner of mostly greens and white meat, music sounding tinny from the vintage radio inside the cabin.
The ferns under which he sat to observe her morning ritual had grown thick and heavier since she’d first arrived, but recently he’d felt like she’d been observing him, as well; this morning he drew deeper into the frilly green shelter of the forest edge when he noted the change: first the familiar scent of coffee, then the creak and sigh of the wicker porch furniture, followed by her silence as the air filled her with seagull cry and hissing rattle of wave over pebble, but now, the surprise-sharp scent of an orange being stripped, its juice exploding like drops of sunrise.
“Interesting,” he thought as he flicked open his tiny fae blade and began to trim his fingernails, and after a moment or two, silently musing “I wonder if I should tell the brotherhood about this?”
Smiling, she glanced sidewise at the stand of fern, slipping out the porch door to place a section of her orange on the edge of the dew-damp cement stoop, then padding barefoot, back into the darkness of the cabin to get herself another cup of coffee.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2025)
This is a really nice turn of words: “followed by her silence as the air filled her with seagull cry and hissing rattle of wave over pebble”. I’m here because I just saw the fourth installment of this story and I wanted to catch up. And maybe find out who’s watching the watcher.
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Thanks, Michael! I’ll let you know who’s watching whom when I know….heh heh heh!
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As a writer, does it bother you not to know?
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I’m learning to wait…and listen. 😉
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gone in a matter of moments
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Love the winsomeness of this tale, Liz. Future visits will be even more special now!
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so kind to share! i love orange slices. making me hungry!
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🍊🙂🍊
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damn!*
Good Six
*compliment on one of the more sensory** of Sixes
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Thanks, Clark!
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Ooh, delightful… what’s next?
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(Shrugs) Anything your heart desires…
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Leave a gift, but darned well don’t make a wish! 🤣
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And DON’T tell him your name! 😆
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🤣 … and don’t say thank you!
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If you notice any of them, for goodness sake, always leave a gift. It’s only right.
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The forest fae thoroughly agree!
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I like how she noticed him and offered a present.
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I got a feeling this may be the start of a beautiful relationship! 😉
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