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It’s too hot to stay aground, too hot to listen to them natter and fight over nothing of real importance.
At least, not to my view of things: steady breeze blowing, cold indigo lake, a flutter of waves, enough roll to bounce an inner tube and splash its passenger (Um yeah, that’d be me), dock warm enough, towel soft right-sized enough to provide refuge, day stretching long enough to forget people things for Nature’s siren song.
Only they have tight plans for the day, have to get out on that boat, scrub the toe rails, pack everything in their appointed cubbies, set sail, anchor out for days in several planned harbors, but we’re behind schedule, so it’s all ruined and we have to grouse, of course we do.
And the dog is sad because he knows he’ll be left behind on an open porch with a bowl of food and a bigger bowl of water.
So instead, I climb that far-away tree to its very top, scant branches making a fine platform, my legs swinging as the trees sways in the stronger winds; I’ll stay with the dog because I know where they hide the spare key, and then the lake and the dock will be ours.
They’ll never find me.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2024)

A child’s dream come true.
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Grousing spoils vacations. Even the dog is said, but at least she is there to stay with him. Nice tale.
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Thanks, Frank!
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cain’t never go wrong, aligning oneself with the canine folk
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Uffda, yah!
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What a lovely story. Nice one, Liz!
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Thank you, Chris!
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If “they” never notice she’s missing then she’s better off with the dog, Liz!
No adults, a lake (w/dock) and freedom to do whatever she wants. Sounds like she’d be much happier.
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She read a lot of Pippi Longstocking in childhood. 😉
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Summer. Sounds like a great plan, Liz.
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Lovely story Liz
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