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Late night, long day, one after the other, until I’m sure I’m going to drop from lack of the basics to keep this aging body going; I’d grazed my way through too sweet and too salty snacks at the various exhibits, and gotten the bargain basement liquid refreshments that were typical to these professional conferences and their bleary evening parties, but what served me in my twenties is unsustainable for a woman in her sixties.
I’d made it through, made connections like a spider on acid, sold several books and bought a few (like a busker salts his cap), enlisted the interest of three – count ‘em three – publishers who were the right niche for the new series by my latest client, but now I’m back home, cleaning up the cat’s indignant piles of vomit in the middle of my quilt, deposited in several key areas and no doubt soaked through the protective pad to the mattress.
Yes, I’m sleeping on the couch tonight because no spare sheets.
And now I’m leaning into the cool of the open refrigerator door, looking for signs of food that won’t sit up, wave a saucy good-bye to me, and slither under said couch, fleeing the terrifying rumble of my hungry belly and gut enflamed from too many days and nights of conference fare. Just a few more years of running this hard for my employer before retiring myself from the people-pleasing hustle, and moving on to something that supports living in balance; something that will sustain, rather than drain my final decades.
Thank God I’m an agent, rather than an actual author.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2023)
(Note: this is absolutely of a work of fiction, though I do have a cat that vomits more than he should, in places that he shouldn’t)

Yikes! This was so well done and so realistic. (this cat owned human has slept on couch)
The dark side of the writing world. Last line made me laugh. Well, guffaw.
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If I laugh at any mortal thing, ’tis that I may not weep…
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And those of us who are readers are so grateful to those who are authors, agents, and publishers because without them, we’d be lost.
Cats are amazing and they do hork up way too often.
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High five and right with ya, Mimi!
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Sounds excruciatingly…brutal, Liz!
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An introvert’s nightmare, but ya gotta do what ya gotta do, yah?
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I wonder if the cat vomited because it missed you. Nice story with realistic detail.
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Thanks! Cat love is a strange way of being, for sure. ;-)
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Just a great story then, apart from the cat (shame)🐈⬛
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Yeah, but cat owners understand it’s a sign of love…(haha!)
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Oh Lord! Living (or re-living) every horrible moment from ‘those days’.
It’s been years upon years but you never forget that awful paste-on-the-smile scene.
Good one, Liz!
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Thanks, Nancy!
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ugh … conference food and drink. i know that tummy pain. something i have in common with the cat. ;)
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Gets ya right in the gut, doesn’t it?
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Loved this! To be sustained not drained. Peace is a lovely thing.
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‘Tis indeed!
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Everyone in the writing field will appreciate this one!
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🙈😂🐧
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A very realistic story.
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Change of pace!😉
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Indeed! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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👍🏼
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Fantastic, Liz. I’m not sure which paragraph is my favorite; the first and last are fighting it out.
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😄 Oh you kids.
Don’t MAKE me stop this car!😂
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