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She’d stepped outside the cabin “to get a breath of fresh air,” she’d said, and pulled the door closed behind her with a soft hiss and snap — something like a snake rattling warning before it bites.
He checked that the coffee maker was fed and ready to go, and wondered at her hurt look when he’d insisted on the “real thing,” decaf being completely unnecessary when you didn’t have to worry about staying up late; it was his vacation, too, after all, and he wasn’t about to brew two separate pots.
“Right…compromise,” he muttered and banged his forehead, just once, on the cabinet door, and with a sigh, reached for the glass jar of decaf to replace the caffeinated grounds he’d already put in the coffee basket.
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Warmth, golden light, and the rich coffee scent disappeared as soon as he closed the cabin door behind him to step outside, his boots crunching across the moon-silvered snow, his coat crackling in the cold as he sat next to her on the bench.
His heavy snowmobiling mitts felt as clumsy around the hot cup as his own – many — attempts at making amends; had he totally blown it with this woman by acting the surly bear, just like his old man had with his ex-wife?
Wrapping her thin, bone-cold hands around the cup, she offered the smallest smile at its contents, and his heart beamed and lightened with hope.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2023)

Loved the warm ending :)
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Thank you, Bernadette! All’s well that ends well!😊
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You ended this beautifully.
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Thank you!
Land somewhere in the middle…
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I am glad to hear the story ended with her smile even if he has to drink decaffeinated coffee.
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😆 Compromise, compromise! That ‘leaded’ coffee will wait until the next morning!
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Beautifully creative tale! You artfully set an inescapable scene.
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Why time away in the wilderness is so important…
Thanks for your comment, Susan!
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With more ‘head banging’ less parental imprinting there’s hope for this guy yet.
Engaging tale of reflection on free Will.
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Reflection and wild-ass guessing can open doors and unsmudge the windows to the soul.
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I’m thinking where Part 2 will take them :)
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Mission accomplished! 😉
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😀😀
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That was so sweet!
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Thanks, Ann!
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Good Six, Liz. Like that you wrote the story from the other POV giving us insight into his perspective. So…perhaps these 2 have a chance after all 😉
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Dear Reader,
You get to decide!
😊
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This is a sweet story. It’s never too late.
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Thank you! And get yourself back to the Art Institute, Man! Cuz Winter is coming! 😃
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Nice one, Liz! Cheers! ☕️
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Thanks, Nancy!
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A sweet attempt at making amends. Lovely story
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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This is a really good story, so much is said in so few sentences!
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Thank you! Follow-up POV switch from last week.
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There’s two sides to every story, it’s really nice to see that despite what it looks like they’re both just thinking of each other, I think they’ll work out. :)
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