
The moon had traveled across the dark canvas of the sky,
Bursting plump and round as a pale white peach,
Pitted and waning to a sodden, softening half,
Slumping to a circlet that slouched on its backside,
Shrinking further still to the tiniest, driest sliver,
Until it finally
Winked out into nothing at all.
If the Mages were correct, the sun would not be rising on this day, unless she did her duty.
She sighed, weary of the repetition,
Thoroughly burned out by the lack of respite,
Disgusted by the fact that she never got credit for preparing
The twin chariots of Moon and Sun,
Day after day, month after month, year after year,
Ad nauseam.
And really, what did the Mages know,
With their imprecise measurements and models, their predictive analytics?
Had they ever tested their theories, ever had another share the crushing responsibility
Of making sure the world continued to turn on its axis?
Convinced by them that she couldn’t risk their being wrong,
She pulled out the golden key on the silver chain that hung beneath her tunic,
Inserted it into the winding arbor to her heart, and
Slowly began to rotate it and tighten the gear
For another round.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2021)
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Full of images. The mages… they try hard and try to do right, but what do they know?
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‘Zackly. Good intentions often isn’t enough.
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Love this Liz!
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Thanks, Chris!
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how cool is that… to tell a story in a manner that mirrors the story itself!
excellento
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Beautiful, Liz. Beautiful.
“Inserted it into the winding arbor to her heart”
Nice imagery all around 🙂
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Thank you! Glad this came thru to folks!
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I loved every word of this, Liz.
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Thank you!
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Marvelous metaphor
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Thank you!
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I like the description of how the day has to start by winding the heart.
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