The fog and sleet haven’t let up since we departed Per’s Point. This far north, the sun is never more than a few inches off the horizon, for a few hours at a time. Had we chosen Midsummer, we’d have had near 24-hour sun.
But transport would’ve been problematic.
One mid-sized Dwarf Diamond would’ve set us up for life. Greedy, we stole a bagful while the dwarves hibernated, and thought to escape by sea.
Lilianne’s fallen asleep as I write this letter, here on our ice floe. I’ll join her soon.
The diamonds weren’t cursed, but we surely are.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2018)
Carrot Ranch Prompt (02/15/2018): In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story on ice. It can be an event on ice, a game on ice or a drink on ice. Go where the prompt leads you.
You just cant mess with dwarves no matter what anyone else might say. Here’s hoping for a nice gust of wind to blow Lilianne and the narrator to safety. Or back into the hands of the dwarves! Nice take on the prompt.
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Thanks Michael!
Or to the bottom of the frigid sea?
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This has the tone of a failed arctic mission like that of Captain Scott, writing the last moments as death and cold close in, and yet you infuse it with magical elements. And what a great idea to have dwarves hibernate!
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The dwarves are pretty happy about that, cuz it’s cold up north…
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I like the idea of a writing hibernation.
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Loved your take!
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Thanks, Ruchira!
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Nice…
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Thank you, Aman!
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I think you packed an awful lot into a short story about ice! And did it well, too.
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Thanl you, Ann!
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Never steal from magic folks.
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All bedazzled in diamonds and no place to spend them. What sort of hell is this??
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Perhaps a Fresh Hell?
(Apologies to Dorothy Parker)
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I like the tone of this. And am amazed. The narrator will write anywhere!
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In some ways, a soul mate?
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