The eldritch space horror smashed against the window, cracking the glass. Jack and Jill dropped hands, stumbling backward. The lounge stereo, silent before, crackled to life. Above, a disco ball groaned and clattered, spackling light over every surface.
Panting, they crab-walked toward the safety of the bar, but the staring red eyes, razor teeth, and stiletto tongue retreated from the window, only to launch again.
Jack began slipping before he felt the depression of the slide. “Jill!”
She grabbed his ankle, desperate, as his shoulders disappeared down into curvy darkness.
As they plummeted, they heard this song: “Calling Glori-ahhhh!”
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2023)
Carrot Ranch prompt (03/06/23): In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about Gloria. You can name a character that comes to you as Gloria or you can interpret the Laura Branigan song into a story. What image comes to you? Go where the prompt leads!
And this is what they heard: Laura Branigan’s Gloria
Oof. That earworm, following them…
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Hee hee hee!
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Oh, this is spooky!
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I love how the song transitioned into a scream.
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Great twist. It will be interesting to see if they plummet back to where they came from or a new place. You are certainly keeping it entertaining. 🙂
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Thanks! Stay tuned…
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