The challenge? Write a story in 6 sentences, no more & no less, and if you’d like, share your creation or just visit and comment on others’ ideas, with GirlieOnTheEdge, Denise. The prompt is “MESS”, and here’s where you join the party: Six Sentence Stories
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Jill glanced down into the buckets beside her, frowning at their contents; a checkered tablecloth and corkscrew in one, and in the other, a brass thimble shaped like an acorn and large enough to fit over her thumb sitting in the palm of a worn baseball mitt were not what she’d expected. But then, neither was falling through a stained-glass portal in a haunted tower and into a world of rolling green hills, large, red-eyed rabbits, and a distant castle.
Fairy tale laws and her rumbling tummy suggested she spread out the tablecloth, and with a flourish, she rolled it out between the rabbits and themselves.
“Huh, I guess that’s what we most need at this point,” she commented, tipping her head at the spread of fat orange carrots and greens before her, and the two peanut butter and jelly sandwiches laid side-by-side on the tablecloth’s corner.
“Sweet,” said Jack as he slipped his switchblade back into his pocket and grabbed a sandwich.
“Indeed,” remarked Roland, as the colony of rabbits crowded up and on to the cloth, pushing each other to the sides and making a general mess of everything; they’d grown weary of nibbling clover, so this was quite a treat.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2023)
I wonder if the change in diet will have an effect on the rabbits.
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Good question!
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They do say carrots are good for the eyes………..but do they make them red?
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Perhaps so…in one world or another…
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Yay! Peanut butter sandwiches and carrots to the rescue. Who says ‘life is no picnic’ 😁😀
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Only those on the wrong side of the portal! Thanks, Mage!
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I am glad to hear those red-eyed rabbits eat orange carrots. This might not be such a bad place to fall into.
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Just gotta ffg ind that portal…😜
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A world where anything might happen and probably will. I’m glad they were able to eat what the cloth provided and look forward to the next installment.
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Then read on…to 6, 7, and 8. And whatever next week brings…
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OK. So we know we’re not dealing with killer rabbits 😁
Comfortable flow, Liz. Looking forward to what these rabbits have to say to our 2 intrepid, albeit involuntary travelers.
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Do we really know this, though? Read on…
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I shall!
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Got to love magical tablecloths!
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They’re a tradition!
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