The challenge? Write a story in 6 sentences, no more & no less, and if you’d like, share your creation or just visit and comment on others’ ideas, with GirlieOnTheEdge, Denise. The prompt is “PASTE”, and here’s where you join the party: Six Sentence Stories
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“I don’t suppose there’s any good reason to go back up the hill and look for that stained glass window, is there?” Jill – for that’s what we’ll call her for lack of anything better – said as she stood and brushed clover and long grass from the skirt of her dirndl.
“I really don’t know,” answered Jack – named for the same lack – as he jumped to his feet and batted dirt and grass from his heavy blond hair. “I’ve never gotten a girl to go this far with me, before, and certainly never through a magic portal”
“No kidding.” Jill rolled her eyes, head down, and then pasted a smile on as she lifted her head and looked him in the eye, thinking “Well, this was clearly a mistake, to go anywhere with someone who looks so geeky in lederhosen.”
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2023)
“… answered Jack – named for the same lack” – loved the rhyme here 😄
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Thanks!
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Something tells me Jack might grow on her, despite how he looks in lederhosen!
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He might, but will she grow on him?
Dun dun DUNNN!
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If ya can’t pass muster wearing lederhosen, then there’s just no chance 🤣
Enjoying the storytelling, Liz. (no more red eyed rabbits though, right?!)
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😅😅 There’s more, see 4!
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🙂
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🙂
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“ Are you a new transfer student? Wanna see my magic portal.”
Way fun Six this week, Liz
enjoyed on a number of levels. “hey! that’s jack and jill”…. “what, brushing grass from skirt?!”
well done, yo
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Thanks, Clark.🙃🙂
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Love it 😁 Wonder if Jill would still think Jack looks geeky in lederhosen, if he was playing an Alpenhorn?
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😅😅
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Cleverly done.
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Thanks, Mimi!
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Nice continuation of the story. It sounds like they fell down the hill.
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They did indeed. Follow 4 tells a little of what they found when they got to the bottom…😉
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Nothing makes romance blossom more than jumping through magic portals.
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This one may take some time, though. See Follow 4…😉🤗
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