It was a dark and stormy night, and the World War I Flying Ace, long since retired, having worked on his Great American Novel all morning and all afternoon, had finally reached the final page.
He peered over his large, rounded nose and between his furry feet, leaning over the typewriter.
Woodstock and family twittered quietly to one another, perched on his stack of completed pages so that the wind wouldn’t blow them away and cause him to retype the entire thing.
He “hmmmed” and squinted and scratched the itchy spot on his ear and underneath his leather pilot’s helmet, then snapped his fingers as a light bulb literally appeared over his head.
He had it, the final ingredient, the last words of the bloody Red Baron as, for the last time, he spiraled down in flames!
Typing the final words, he bundled up the pages, placing his typewriter on top to secure them; at long last, they could all celebrate his success together!
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2022)
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This was JOY today!
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You know you’re in for a treat when the first sentence brings an instant smile to your face.
Snoopy and the Red Baron, inimitable icons from our youth. Classic, Liz!
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Thanks! And skol with a root beer, from me!
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Peanuts! Cool. (Um, what were the final words of Red Baron?)
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You’ll have to read the book! 😆
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Can’t wait!
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Well, he has to submit it to editor and publisher Lucy van Pelt, first…🙄
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Thanks for the fun reminder of Snoopy typing his novel….I think that would have been a great end to it!
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I want to believe that’s what happened–again and again!
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Snoopy rocks!
And so does your story, Liz
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Can’t lose with Snoopy and Woodstock!
Thanks, Ceayr!😊
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Oh, gotta LOVE this one!! My fond friends, Red Baron Snoopy and Woodstock, YES 🙂
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❤❤❤
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💖
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And as he utters a final, ‘Curse you, Red Baron’, he lets his mind drift to the evenings he spent in dimly-lit French cafes quaffing root beer and flirting outrageously with the girls. No, he thinks, I was right not to mention these evenings in my memoir.’ Thank you, Liz, for featuring my enduring hero in your story. I could see the whole episode. Just a pity that Schulz is not here to draw it. Delightful story, beautifully written.
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My pleasure, entirely! Glad it brought back good memories. Grateful that Schulz left us a huge body of work!
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Snoopy forever, it’s time for a root beer at the officer’s club!
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Absolutely!!
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funny looking dogs are the best dogs.. I had one named Mugley because she was my ugly dog. Sweet, but cover your watch ugly. good six BTW
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Yay for the funny looking dog with the big black nose!
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He’s a charmer!
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lol nicely done
took me back to a younger and simpler time.
fun Six
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Skol! (Clinks root beer mug)
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That’s no shaggy dog story Liz. Love the cartoon element here. Go Snoopy!
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Watch out Red Baron!
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Love it, Liz! I’ve happy memories of the Charles Schulz books! 😁
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He’s a home boy for me & mine. Love his cartoons, too!
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A story worth way more than Peanuts, Liz. Destined to be a classic. Here’s some music to celebrate. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wtJ1Gnh9wPU
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Childhood classic!
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I like how he used the typewriter as a paper weight. May those pages not blow away with the Red Baron.
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Go, Snoopy, go!!
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