She perched, edge and center, on the metal folding chair, ankles crossed and angled toes barely touching the floor, her SoftRose painted lips pursed, her eyebrows raised even higher above their normally penciled boundaries, a single vertical line deepening between those brows, but slightly favoring the left, while two small circles of color heated each cheek, as if they’d been purposefully applied with a sable brush.
Her pale blue twinset and matching skirt sedately complemented her conservative white pumps, and the pillbox hat, with its wisp of floral lace and placed just so on her blued and carefully-styled hair, trembled with emotion; something was disturbing her normal reserve, or as we kids might’ve said, back in the day “harshing her mellow.”
We knew it was wrong, but we snickered from our seats in the back of the auditorium when she stood up, her metal chair uttering a single distressed shriek, and strode in her ladylike way to the microphone, heels clicking staccato in the surprised silence that filled the school gymnasium.
Few outside the immediate family had ever witnessed Mary Ellen Mabrey’s temper, but they were all about to get an historic first-hand view at this town hall meeting.
The microphone squealed as she stepped up, then it, too was silenced as she said in carefully controlled, barely neutral tones, “If you think you’re going to keep that monstrosity of a sculpture in the center of our town, you are out of your ‘effing’ minds. That man was an unapologetic racist and misogynist, and it will not stand, even if I have to tear it down with my own two hands!”
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2021)
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When enough is enough for Mary Ellen!
So well described, Liz. I can see it all happening.
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Thanks. We should all see/be more of this.
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Indeed, Liz! there’s a great dearth of straight-talking these days.
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Powerful, indeed. Brilliantly written.
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Thank you kindly, Indira!
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My pleasure, dear.
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Your character is wonderfully detailed, Liz. Makes for easy visualization and while we’re busy imagining Ms. Mabry and the atmosphere within the auditorium, we’re not quite aware just how tense the situation is… Until the very end!
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Boom!😂 Yep. Thanks, Denise!
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Great build up, Liz… and finally the mouse roars!! Good on her.
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All for doing what your soul says is right.
Thanks, Chris!
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You painted her so vividly in a minimum of sentences….I felt as if I were watching her at that town hall meeting!
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Thank you, Ann. 🤗
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She’ll get her way, it’s obvious. Well told!
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Thanks, Mimi!
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A wonderful build up. Wasn’t sure what had motivated her to step right up to the microphone. And then.
Good on her. Go Mary Ellen Mabrey!
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Salty is sweet, when it comes for the right cause!
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Freaking awesome discription of the main character. I felt like I knew her before she spoke. And “an historic.” THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU. Even Time magazine gets that wrong. So proud that you got it right. God save the English Language! I’llget off my soap box now.
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I’m glad this spoke to you, UP!
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Powerful piece, Liz, but I hope that your MC isn’t just rewriting history based on this week’s mores.
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Her tirades are consistent, her content solid. 😉
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” …two small circles of color heated each cheek, as if they’d been purposefully applied with a sable brush.”
To paraphrase Whitman, ‘I read the Six envious’
Two words; yow!
Not too visual, right?
It’s an open secret that I participate here as much for the opportunity to better my skills. This is one of those that, from time-to-time, I think, ‘Lets try going all-out on the description of physical appearance.’
…and, nice hook at the end.
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Thanks, Clark!
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Beautifully done, Liz. Go, Mary Ellen. More power to her pillbox hat. Sing it, Bob. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8xZGEHErDA
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She saves the leopard skin for toppling g idols…
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🙂
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