Ella arrived back home just before midnight. The golden carriage’d been delayed—unexpected maintenance—so she’d had to find her own way. Skirts rain-soaked, glass slippers…well, slippery…she shucked the gown and ran home in her chemise, dropping one slipper in the mud.
The prince was sure. The prince was an excellent tracker. He followed her prints to the kitchen door of the small estate, arriving almost before she did. Her figure was outlined in the firelight from the flickering stove. He stepped closer, slipper in hand.
She turned, muddy, skin-soaked, and utterly herself.
An eager flush blossomed his cheeks.
© Liz Husebye Hartmann (2020)
Carrot Ranch (07/02/2020): In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes the word blossom. You can use the word as a noun or a verb, or even as a name. How does it fit into your story? Go where the prompt leads!
I always like a well rewritten tale 🥿 (that’s supposed to be the glass slipper!
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Hope the shoe fit with this one!
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That’s a fine retelling! Ain’t about the dress now, is it?
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Precisely! Never was…at least in my version!
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Oh, my. I could see this fairy tale continuing on…
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Well that’s a different (and much better) version of the story!
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Thanks! I love Cinderellas who get sh*t done & are beautiful because of it!
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